Sayuri in the sunset

Finally I made it...It took damn long, because I'm so busy >.< Sayuri looks a littel chubby, I think ;) I thinks she was in her hometown for a visit and now she has to leave again(the background dosen't really fit because it is in adesert but I do not mind) AND: Hey, I want some criticism(???) not only consent or how it is called! I hate being prised, I'm someone who really fells bad being praised...please I want to became better so please tell me what I can do!